some of my god forsaken poetry

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a useless poll just for fun

yeah
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no!!
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thumbs up
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7%
thumbs down
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7%
step away from the computer, slowly
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27%
are you that one guy I used to hate?
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do you like chocolate cookies?
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how about oatmeal cookies?
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or maybe internet cookies?
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Total votes : 15

Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby at1with0 » Tue Aug 16, 2011 1:29 pm

crossfire


seeds of truth impregnate
blackened are they by the fiction, this
dinosaurs pouring her onto a page
men watch with swift ambition
players audition; some accepted some rejected
exiting a design
Who is the designer.
infinity sheds its skin
revealing itself, naked
projecting down in sweet repose
a world peopled by masqueraders
an influx of zombie and hunter
who have given their minds to a certain purpose
upholding old laws
until their upheaval.

What myriad permutations existence can bring
to the relatively free,
free to do, to be, to invent and discover,
to see and to know or to be blind and ignorant
by a self-limiting choice.

a tall tree before
an instantiation of some obscure abstract principle
with unbreakable shell but malleable interior.
creating objects on the other side,
not greener,
just more #397D02
for better or for worse
and a tall tree after
"Be as wise as a serpent and as innocent as a dove."
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Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby DIss0n80r » Fri Sep 02, 2011 6:57 am

Multiverse, Schmultiverse. :roll:
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Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby at1with0 » Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:52 am

One really long verse. :crazy:
"Be as wise as a serpent and as innocent as a dove."
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Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby DIss0n80r » Fri Sep 02, 2011 12:50 pm

Universe, Schmuniverse. :mrgreen:
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Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby at1with0 » Sat Sep 03, 2011 12:12 am

fuk youniverse? :P :P
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Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby DIss0n80r » Sat Sep 03, 2011 3:06 am

"I can conceive of nothing in religion, science, or philosophy, that is anything more than the proper thing to wear, for a while." ~ Charles Fort
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Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby at1with0 » Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:37 am

hee hee hee
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Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby bionic » Mon Sep 05, 2011 5:00 am




It IS funnier in German
“Whether you sniff it smoke it eat it or shove it up your ass the result is the same: addiction.”
― William S. Burroughs
(love&forgive yourself..and everyone else)
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Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby at1with0 » Wed Sep 14, 2011 5:36 pm

as the glimmering moonlight loves the deep black ocean of night
under the jewels in the sky
showing me the depth of my own heart, effortlessly she
slides the outer layers off,
the daughter of adoration incarnate, her
beauty shining upon my fervent skin, warmth
knowing no match even in the depths of the sun

she, the moon and the stars, the radiance overwhelming
as a soothing, blessed peace overtakes
true to her word with the promise of bliss and love

the passport is in her hands, clasped with mine
we shall soon see what is to be:
everything falling into place
with a passionate embrace, she whispers to me
showing me the splendor of creation
showing her the splendor of the us,
the us that grows like the tree of life
alive are we, together we shall be
living in knowledge
living in love
they know no bounds in her

I am in heaven, witnessing how Aphrodite envies her
"Be as wise as a serpent and as innocent as a dove."
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Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby DIss0n80r » Wed Sep 14, 2011 9:10 pm

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