The Black Vault

Torture when?

to be torn is to be tortured, no?
nuthin..ferget about it

so poetry?

The sun comes up
The sun goes down
It tries to never have a frown
But the sun is sad
The sun is mad
The sun is feeling quite unsound
It feels there's no one else around
Nobody says, "hi", "Hey there". "Hello"
It says, " I am here", to a great big zero.
So it hangs on..doning the best it can
But the sun has become a very sad man
The sun just hangs there, looking all yellow
The sun, it is a yellow fellow
It's wants validation and to be mellow
Please, someone won't you just say, "yo"?


I just made that up off the top of my head, cause' i am cool l,ike that

bionic wrote:to be torn is to be tortured, no?
nuthin..ferget about it

Ok good for a second there I thought you meant torture I consciously inflicted.

so poetry?

The sun comes up
The sun goes down
It tries to never have a frown
But the sun is sad
The sun is mad
The sun is feeling quite unsound
It feels there's no one else around
Nobody says, "hi", "Hey there". "Hello"
It says, " I am here", to a great big zero.
So it hangs on..doning [sic] the best it can
But the sun has become a very sad man
The sun just hangs there, looking all yellow
The sun, it is a yellow fellow
It's wants validation and to be mellow
Please, someone won't you just say, "yo"?


I just made that up off the top of my head, cause' i am cool l,ike that

Cool

I wonder what this poem says about you.

complex..like any other person that ever where..including you, fyi

oh and look at you..picking me apart..all anilyzing and stuff...nancy drew..I fear you would disect me if you thought you could

I just like chatting with ya.

I know..me too

It seems to mean she puts on a brave face and tries to keep her head above water, but inside....

how not to drown 101..keep your head above water..hold your breath when under..leanr to tread water..learn to float...learn to swim
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D7ErpFBO7RI
(this is you)

ride the current
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VL893RIp3gg
(this is me)

Don't worry bout me, sweetheart. I'll still be thriving long after you've broken in two.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f_0Vzep9aoY