some of my god forsaken poetry

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a useless poll just for fun

yeah
0
No votes
no!!
1
7%
thumbs up
1
7%
thumbs down
1
7%
step away from the computer, slowly
4
27%
are you that one guy I used to hate?
3
20%
do you like chocolate cookies?
1
7%
how about oatmeal cookies?
2
13%
or maybe internet cookies?
2
13%
 
Total votes : 15

Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby at1with0 » Mon Jul 11, 2011 9:07 am

Here it is.
The solo I mentioned is 4sec until 2:04.
http://www.alphaomegadimension.info/media/my_name.MP3
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Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby bionic » Mon Jul 11, 2011 10:43 am

Your name is the cuppycake song?
Because that's what I heard.
Perhaps a louder, screamier, more adhd gruff voiced, Cuppycake song..but cuppycake non the less
:lol:
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Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby DIss0n80r » Mon Jul 11, 2011 1:26 pm

That poem seems to be a sort of meta-representation of your poetry.
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Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby DIss0n80r » Mon Jul 11, 2011 1:28 pm

And somewhat tongue-in-cheek, as well.
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Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby at1with0 » Mon Jul 11, 2011 2:50 pm

I expect no one will see what I see.
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Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby at1with0 » Mon Jul 11, 2011 3:05 pm

DIss0n80r wrote:And somewhat tongue-in-cheek, as well.

Indeed.
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Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby DIss0n80r » Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:18 pm

Hmm :think:
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Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby bionic » Mon Jul 11, 2011 10:46 pm

at1with0 wrote:
DIss0n80r wrote:And somewhat tongue-in-cheek, as well.

Indeed.


don't you forgive, ever?
Can't you just let bygones be bygones..including your own by-gone?

I seriously, hope someday you are cleansed enough to reclaim a sort of innocence

This is what the light is for, fyi

sometimes we simply MUST..release our ..baggage
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Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby DIss0n80r » Mon Jul 11, 2011 10:58 pm

Maybe he doesn't like being preached at and patronized. I know I don't like it.
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Re: some of my god forsaken poetry

Postby bionic » Mon Jul 11, 2011 11:05 pm

it's my job and you know it
tough love
you didn't even recognize me
you actually thought someone else was me, because of your snottyness
the joke, and the lesson is on you
learn it
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