The Black Vault

Now the poll works.

false enlightenment



they bring thee to thy fate, frozen behind time
fashioning the slumber into an ecstasy

a being becoming, a different star dust
lies furiously told: an awakening caught in the ways of the flesh
this one's principal wind: divinity.



our now that has the love
I of our breathless, disembodied essence
with a punishing fate, diversities opened, chanting nobility
reign thee over all that is you.


the waves of the way eroding age-old levies
celebration of the undead rising
lungs filled with wind and silence
they, tamed by laughter
fables having a timeless source


ways of wisdom overwhelming the strength of words.

why "false enlightenment"?

Your guess is as good as mine.

any kind of enlightenment is enlightment..to chose and decide is just ego driven snobbery
(which goes against enlightenment)
just an opinon
you need to add a question mark to your title (or first line)
I feel, just my opinion

After it's written I don't edit.

that's very..um..honest of you
it is what it is
organic

I lied.

After a while sitting in my poetry collection, I realized that I wrote "A massage that is a message" but instead I wrote "a massage that is a massage." That was the one time I edited something.

A lot of grate things come by accident. I think editing kind of teaches the writer to not have accidents which might sound good.

Lots of the time, the word you in my poetry is nothing more than a reference to me. False enlightenment is a concept explored in Fight Club. The acid scene.


Well I'm still not sure why "false enlightenment" came out. I'm sure it means something to someone.

In an effort to try to not be so rigid-minded, I have edited a poem that I called implosion swirling.

http://www.alphaomegadimension.info/med ... losion.pdf

I'm working on a new poem .. could take a while though. I was present for a conversation between musicians and one asked the other: do you ever write music you can't play? All the time, was the response. At the moment, I have a poem but articulating what I want to articulate is something that's difficult for me. It's got something to do with Taoism, theories of everything, and reality; so I probably won't do these subjects justice since they're all so over my head. But I'll do what I can.

I like it. I like it a-lot.