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a useless poll just for fun

yeah
0
No votes
no!!
1
7%
thumbs up
1
7%
thumbs down
1
7%
step away from the computer, slowly
4
27%
are you that one guy I used to hate?
3
20%
do you like chocolate cookies?
1
7%
how about oatmeal cookies?
2
13%
or maybe internet cookies?
2
13%
 
Total votes : 15

Postby at1with0 » Wed Mar 09, 2011 3:47 pm

Now the poll works.
"it is easy to grow crazy"
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Postby at1with0 » Fri Mar 11, 2011 12:44 am

false enlightenment



they bring thee to thy fate, frozen behind time
fashioning the slumber into an ecstasy

a being becoming, a different star dust
lies furiously told: an awakening caught in the ways of the flesh
this one's principal wind: divinity.



our now that has the love
I of our breathless, disembodied essence
with a punishing fate, diversities opened, chanting nobility
reign thee over all that is you.


the waves of the way eroding age-old levies
celebration of the undead rising
lungs filled with wind and silence
they, tamed by laughter
fables having a timeless source


ways of wisdom overwhelming the strength of words.
"it is easy to grow crazy"
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Postby bionic » Sun Mar 13, 2011 2:46 am

why "false enlightenment"?
Willie Wonka quotes..
What is this Wonka, some kind of funhouse?
Why? Are you having fun?
A little nonsense now and then is relished by the wisest men.
We are the music makers, we are the dreamers of dreams
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Postby at1with0 » Sun Mar 13, 2011 6:33 am

Your guess is as good as mine. :P
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Postby bionic » Thu Mar 17, 2011 11:52 pm

any kind of enlightenment is enlightment..to chose and decide is just ego driven snobbery
(which goes against enlightenment)
just an opinon
you need to add a question mark to your title (or first line)
I feel, just my opinion
Willie Wonka quotes..
What is this Wonka, some kind of funhouse?
Why? Are you having fun?
A little nonsense now and then is relished by the wisest men.
We are the music makers, we are the dreamers of dreams
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Postby at1with0 » Fri Mar 18, 2011 1:32 am

:shock: After it's written I don't edit.
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Postby bionic » Sat Mar 19, 2011 12:16 am

that's very..um..honest of you
it is what it is
organic
Willie Wonka quotes..
What is this Wonka, some kind of funhouse?
Why? Are you having fun?
A little nonsense now and then is relished by the wisest men.
We are the music makers, we are the dreamers of dreams
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Postby at1with0 » Sat Mar 19, 2011 2:57 am

I lied.

After a while sitting in my poetry collection, I realized that I wrote "A massage that is a message" but instead I wrote "a massage that is a massage." That was the one time I edited something.

A lot of grate things come by accident. I think editing kind of teaches the writer to not have accidents which might sound good.

Lots of the time, the word you in my poetry is nothing more than a reference to me. False enlightenment is a concept explored in Fight Club. The acid scene.


Well I'm still not sure why "false enlightenment" came out. I'm sure it means something to someone. :mrgreen:
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Postby at1with0 » Sun Mar 20, 2011 3:26 pm

In an effort to try to not be so rigid-minded, I have edited a poem that I called implosion swirling.

http://www.alphaomegadimension.info/med ... losion.pdf

I'm working on a new poem .. could take a while though. I was present for a conversation between musicians and one asked the other: do you ever write music you can't play? All the time, was the response. At the moment, I have a poem but articulating what I want to articulate is something that's difficult for me. It's got something to do with Taoism, theories of everything, and reality; so I probably won't do these subjects justice since they're all so over my head. But I'll do what I can.
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Postby bionic » Mon Mar 21, 2011 10:39 pm

I like it. I like it a-lot.
8-)
Willie Wonka quotes..
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Why? Are you having fun?
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