After a while sitting in my poetry collection, I realized that I wrote "A massage that is a message" but instead I wrote "a massage that is a massage." That was the one time I edited something.
A lot of grate things come by accident. I think editing kind of teaches the writer to not have accidents which might sound good.
Lots of the time, the word you in my poetry is nothing more than a reference to me. False enlightenment is a concept explored in Fight Club. The acid scene.
Well I'm still not sure why "false enlightenment" came out. I'm sure it means something to someone.