So a "what if we lost all electrical devices and society is set back a few centuries?"
I think this is a great premise for a series and has the potential really get to what would happen if we lost our gadgets and modern conveniences. Where a simple cut can kill and water must be fetched and cleaned. The heights or depths we'd go in such a world.
The story found it's legs a little bit at a time and is now where I think it should be, the good guys making some ripples in the water for the bad guys.
What does anyone else think?